Short poem I wrote (beware, there be emo-ness here)

MetalHead · Post by **MetalHead** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:40 am

Not even sure why I'm posting it here, but here it is. E-M-O time!

I can vanish every sight of you
I can blacken out your name
I can fight a war to forget you
But I can't overcome this pain

I can't stand to see your elation
Can't tell wether to run or fight
Can't stomach whats become of you
But I would burn to put things right

I face myself in solitude
I face the ruins behind the steel
I face the loveless back of you
But I hide from what is real

It was anger that you lashed at me
It was frustration from your heart
It was confusion that got the better of you
And it was our love you tore apart

JudgeKing · Post by **JudgeKing** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:52 am

MetalHead wrote:Not even sure why I'm posting it here, but here it is. E-M-O time!

I can vanish every sight of you
I can blacken out your name
I can fight a war to forget you
But I can't overcome this pain

I can't stand to see your elation
Can't tell wether to run or fight
Can't stomach whats become of you
But I would burn to put things right

I face myself in solitude
I face the ruins behind the steel
I face the loveless back of you
But I hide from what is real

It was anger that you lashed at me
It was frustration from your heart
It was confusion that got the better of you
And it was our love you tore apart

Is this meant to be funny? It's very well done.

Aaron · Post by **Aaron** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:08 pm

So, you a big Amy Lee fan?

MetalHead · Post by **MetalHead** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:38 pm

Cpl Kendall wrote:So, you a big Amy Lee fan?

If you mean Amy Lee from Evanesence...well, as long as she keeps her mouth shut.

sunnyside · Post by **sunnyside** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:49 pm

Got dumped?

MetalHead · Post by **MetalHead** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:55 pm

sunnyside wrote:Got dumped?

No actually, it just sorta came from nowhere, lol. Weird.

In fairness though, had a few drinks last night, prolly thought "gee, maybe I should spread this round" haha.

Reliant121 · Post by **Reliant121** » Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:23 pm

Ahk it be a gooden and it doth lead toward Emo.

It would be worthy of the many poems i have written ^^

Granitehewer · Post by **Granitehewer** » Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:12 pm

thats sweet,dev, top knotch

Sionnach Glic · Post by **Sionnach Glic** » Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:41 pm

Wow, long time no see, Granite.

Granitehewer · Post by **Granitehewer** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:52 am

thats because i travel at less than warp 6 when cloaked, and you're never on msn!

Sionnach Glic · Post by **Sionnach Glic** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 5:59 pm

My computer seems to hate MSN for some reason.

MetalHead · Post by **MetalHead** » Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:53 pm

Rochey wrote:My computer seems to hate MSN for some reason.

try a clone. Like Trillian for example.

Short poem I wrote (beware, there be emo-ness here)

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