The Elenir Universe (c)

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:31 am

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Thread moved to Writer's Forum at Monroe's request, 25/10/08. [Rochey]

Post by **Mikey** » Thu Sep 11, 2008 3:00 pm

I sense a great deal of detail soon to come...

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:07 pm

shran · Post by **shran** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:31 pm

At what level should we consider these people to be? Iron age, Bronze age, medieval, Roman, or perhaps akin to 20th century?

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:41 pm

Good question, sorry I totally dropped the ball on that one

The Andurin are akin to the Babylonians or Summerians in technology. The others (ones still existing) range from Iron Age to the later medieval age depending on geography and resources.

shran · Post by **shran** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:45 pm

Uhmm, maybe a dumb question,. but how is a global war going to take place if most technology s medieval at best? You'd need communication, fast communication to coordinate a global war, or next to independent generals.

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:10 pm

shran wrote:Uhmm, maybe a dumb question,. but how is a global war going to take place if most technology s medieval at best? You'd need communication, fast communication to coordinate a global war, or next to independent generals.

Its a lot smaller of a world. The size of the whole of the world is about half the size of Europe and northern africa. If you shirnk how much of the world is known then things like East v West Roman Empires, Alexander the Great's conquest, Persian War, things of that nature soon become World Wars in their own right by involving the majority of the nations that are currently known.

Sionnach Glic · Post by **Sionnach Glic** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:54 pm

This is a bit of a nitpick, but a planet that small should have virtualy no gravity.

Post by **Mikey** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 10:18 pm

Rochey wrote:This is a bit of a nitpick, but a planet that small should have virtualy no gravity.

Meh. The core could have a much higher concentration of heavier elements, or some such.

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 10:49 pm

Rochey wrote:This is a bit of a nitpick, but a planet that small should have virtualy no gravity.

What I mean is they haven't explored the whole planet yet

jeesh lol

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:32 pm

Reliant121 · Post by **Reliant121** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:22 pm

I like it. It's quite detailed and complex.

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:57 pm

Reliant121 wrote:I like it. It's quite detailed and complex.

Thanks. When I started working on it I wanted a universe as complex as Lotr or Star Wars (when it was new

). Something that could easily be added onto with stories about other characters and some gray areas that are mentioned but not detailed described. That way people's imaginations can run amonk.

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 7:56 am

Monroe · Post by **Monroe** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:16 pm

Come on, no constructive critism? I'm posting it cause I'm currious what people think, what would they do differently, if something is unrealistic. Come on

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