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Wow the Daystrom has House MD on board.

Ok this:

"It seems that he is late." Dr. Salan remarked to Lt. Elbram, the chief nurse. "Most inappropriate to leave one's staff waiting and failing to respond to calls on the intercom. He, after all, set the time for this staff meeting. It would seem logical that he would select a time that would be the most convienient for everyone involved." Snorting with laughter, Pigrath'er, the ships medic, better known to the crew as Piggy, interjected, "If you recall, Doctor, he ordered all of us to be here at 0900 hours. He never said that he'd be here then, did he? You two haven't met the good Doctor yet, have you?"

Should look like this:

"It seems that he is late." Dr. Salan remarked to Lt. Elbram, the chief nurse.

"Most inappropriate to leave one's staff waiting and failing to respond to calls on the intercom. He, after all, set the time for this staff meeting. It would seem logical that he would select a time that would be the most convienient for everyone involved."

Snorting with laughter, Pigrath'er, the ships medic, better known to the crew as Piggy, interjected, "If you recall, Doctor, he ordered all of us to be here at 0900 hours. He never said that he'd be here then, did he? You two haven't met the good Doctor yet, have you?"

Its much easier to read. A big block of text can get hard to read. Then again thats just my opinion...

Teaos wrote:

Also, I think sending the Defiant with would be what Starfleet would do and sending a Jem'Hadar with just makes sense. We had a Tholian advisor in Tholian space, why not a Jem'Hadar one in Dominion space?

The Defiant is assigned to DS9 and while it goes off and does missions its primary job is to hang around there.

The whole idea of this mission is thata once we are through the wormhole there is no going back until the mission is done. There will be no reinforcements, no trade, the only communications is through the Dominion.

Thus the Defiant can't come with us. Also there is a limit on the size of our fleet.

Fair enough. What about Taran'atar. As an observer/adviser?

I have no idea who that is but I see no reason why not.

Teaos wrote:I have no idea who that is but I see no reason why not.

I think that is the Jem'Hadar that Odo sent from the GQ, to serve on DS9. Appears only in the books.


By the way Teaos. Your right. I edited my entries and they look alot better. Thanks.

YES!!!!!!

F*ck that was a lot of work...

As you can see I have the fleet layed out with the crew in it for easy reference, then the full bios are under it, we each have our main characters and then the NPC's are divided up by ship to make them easier to find.

Since you can now all see what positions are open you are free to make some more NPC's if you want, now that I have it layed out like this its easy for me to edit them in.

Hopefully this should make posting a lot easier since you can have the brief open in one window and your post in another and flick between them for reference.

The ship stats are up but not hugely important since we know most of that off by heart.

Finally done. Well I think its done, might have missed something.

The only thing left for me to post is the Full lenght mission brief but I'm not going to do that to tonight since it needs tweaking.

I'm also going to do a very basic story guide, so we all know the general direction the story is headed, I cant go to far in the future since what we do will effect how the mission goes.

We'll probably be at DS9 for the rest of this week so we can get in the swing of it then I'll launch the fleet.

Hey Rochey a little help for you:

Second in Command: Andyeskovene Rocheineskina, for ease of pronunciation this is often abrieviated to 'Rochey'
Age: 42
Homeworld: Tholia
Service record: Joined the Tholian Military at the age of 23 as a tactical officer, rose quickly through the ranks to become second in command of the starship Tnyeskine, during one of Starfleets officer exchange programs he was transfered to the USS Daystrom at the rank of Commander.

Rather reclusive, he is not often seen unless on duty, prefering to keep to his quarters which he keeps at a more 'comfortable' temperature. He is more militaristic and willing to use force to achieve results than other Starfleet officersand he has also earned a reputation among the crew as being quite ruthless and vicious in combat.
He is also prone to complaining about the designs of Federation ships, and the temperature the ship is normally kept at.

Effecient and punctual, he detests laziness or idleness amongst the crew and comes down hard on members of the crew he considers to be shirking their responsibility. This has not made him popular amongst the crew members, who see him as stern and rather merciless in handing out punishments.

Your old bio.

Just copy and paste this and add a paragraph or two to the bottom, will take like 3 minutes, Do it now, right this minute, its not hard.

Just a reminder everyone. I seem to have ended up with SO MANY characters, please feel free to use anyone you want in your posts, my regular characters as well as NPCs.

Whew! Nice work, Teaos.

EDIT: Except I think you put up the wrong Daystrom; this was the last compromise:

USS-Daystrom NCC-77127

Ship: Akira class heavy cruiser version 3.66

Length : 464.43 m
Beam : 316.67 m
Height : 87.43 m
Decks : 19

Mass : 3,055,000 tons
Crew : 475 (evac 4500)

3 x Type XII phaser arrays, total output 40,000 TeraWatts
15 x Pulse fire quantum torpedo tube with 1200 rounds and photon torpedo replicator

Regenerative shield system, total capacity 3,825,745 TeraJoules
Heavy Duranium/Tritanium Double hull plus 7.2 cm ablative armour.
High level Structural Integrity Field

Normal Cruise : 8.0
Maximum Cruise : 9.63
Maximum Rated : 9.9 for 12 hours.

Beam Firepower : 800
Torpedo Firepower : 10,125
Weapon Range and Accuracy : 1350
Shield Strength : 1417
Hull Armour : 1480
Speed : 1601
Combat Manoeuvrability : 2256
Overall: 3636

Reliant - please let me know if I played D'Tyra out of character. I'm happy to edit it if you think something isn't right.

*EDIT* Hi Uzume!

Fixed the Daystrom.

Just copy and paste this and add a paragraph or two to the bottom, will take like 3 minutes, Do it now, right this minute, its not hard.

Sure. This is 10 years since our last mission, right?

Name: Andyeskovene Rocheineskina, [for ease of pronunciation this is often abrieviated to 'Rochey']

Rank: Commander

Position: Fleet coordinator (USS Paladin)

Age: 52

Homeworld: Tholia

Service record:
After joining the Tholian Military at the age of 23 as a tactical officer, he rose quickly through the ranks to become second in command of the starship TAS Tnyeskine. During one of Starfleets officer exchange programs he was transfered to the USS Daystrom at the rank of Commander.

He was later transferred to the USS Dakota and acted as XO on that vessel for a brief period before returning to the Tholian Assembly, at which point he was inducted into the Assembly Inteligence Unit for the next nine years. Further details during this period of his career are currently unavailable.

Shortly after the unveiling of the new Federation 'Paladin' class of warship, he was transferred back to the Tholian Starfleet and his name was put forth as a candidate for the next Assembly/Federation officer exchange program. Due to his previous service with the USS Paladin's captain he was assigned to that vessel as fleet coordinator.

Personality:
Rather reclusive, he is not often seen unless on duty, prefering to keep to his quarters which he keeps at a more 'comfortable' temperature. He is more militaristic and willing to use force to achieve results than other Starfleet officers and has also earned a reputation among the crew as being quite ruthless and vicious in combat.
He is also prone to complaining about the designs of Federation ships and, occasionaly, the temperature the ship is normally kept at.

Effecient and punctual, he detests laziness or idleness amongst the crew and comes down hard on members of the crew he considers to be shirking their responsibility. This has not made him popular amongst the crew members, who see him as stern and rather merciless in handing out punishments to those under his command.

Told you I'd get it up tonight!

Wow its done!

Looks good, added to list.

Mikey wrote:Reliant - please let me know if I played D'Tyra out of character. I'm happy to edit it if you think something isn't right.

*EDIT* Hi Uzume!

You played her well. A bit more reserved than i would have done, but more befitting of a Romulan.

Teaos, by now are you intending the E-E to have been destroyed, and the E-F to be about to take its place? I think the Enterprise should always be the flag and most powerful ship. Perhaps the E-F could be the next Paladin class ship? Much like the USS Galaxy and then USS E-D? And Picard should captain it, too. Not that it matters much, :p

Was it Dark Omen that designed Enterprises down to like G or something? His models were really spetacular. I say if we want to use the Enterprise we ask him if we can use his ship designs.