My first short story on DITL.
Re: My first short story on DITL.
I am enjoying the psychological aspects as much as the action, please keep it up.
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Re: My first short story on DITL.
Thank you, but I would like to know with the 500+ views is if there is anything that anyone doesn't understand? I want to make sure I have the detail well placed enough so that people are following along without getting the "where the hell did that come from" trouble.
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