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Request for Beta-readers

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I'm finishing a major edit of one of my novelettes. I should be done by Friday. I was wondering if anyone would care to beta-read it for me. I don't want to post it here; I was hoping I could e-mail it to whoever would volunteer.

It's about 16,000 words and set on my Draconia. An alien ship crashes on Draconia and the dragons and the Humans at the colony try to save the pilot. Meanwhile, the main dragon character, Varthikes, defends the main Human character's daughter, Amity, from a dragon opposed to the Human presence on the planet.

Interested? I especially would like comments on the medical situation that I have in the story. If it's, at least, passable.

Thank you. :)
"What has been done has been done and cannot be undone."--Ruth, All the Weyrs of Pern
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